18 March 2014

Chinatown Plot Diagram


The following spaghetti incident is the result of me figuring out what actually happens in Chinatown -including all evidences' plants and payoffs.

Its basic structure resembles Blake Snyder's Board (first row is Act One, second and third are Act Two, and fourth is Act Three), while sequences are marked with letters A, B, etc., according to Frank Daniel's teachings.

In the yellow box, there is an index with the colour coding, in regard to the several characters and their subplots.

Enjoy!


(Diagram created with Grafio app.)

14 March 2014

Movie Plots: Doing the Twist

The Usual Suspects' twist at the end: a delight or an insult to the audience?
In a film’s plot, a twist is the revelation of new information, which surprises the audience and makes them reconsider what they know about the story so far. If carefully prepared and executed, a twist can be a moment of great delight.


Plot Twist Placement


One common misunderstanding is that a twist only happens at the very end of a film. In fact, twists appear anywhere in a story.

Both sister and daughter? That's too twisted, even for Jake Gittes.
When Faye Dunaway shouts “She's my sister and my daughter,” several scenes before Chinatown’s finale, she causes a major twist, which becomes the catalyst for the story’s resolution.

Bill Murray’s realisation that he lives the same day for a second time is the film's inciting incident; a twist that happens not far from the beginning of Groundhog Day, setting the story’s major conflict and giving him the whole film to resolve it.

Friday the 13th franchise: Jason keeps coming back to life; a twist that everyone expects.
Supernatural slasher films, like of the series Friday the 13th or A Nightmare on Elm Street, start and finish with the dead killer coming back to life, to continue his murder spree. This is a twist of which the purpose is not to surprise, but to fulfill the audience’s expectations for these films’ genre conventions.

It is obvious that, depending on their placement, twists have different functions in story structure. Nevertheless, the twist at the end is the one with the biggest effect, determining the audience's utter satisfaction or disappointment.


Problems With the Twist at the End


Problematic twists usually appear near the end of films, because it is the most difficult part for the screenwriter to pull off. A twist near the beginning, however absurd, can still be promising and lead to a strong story, as long as the issues that it brings are resolved later. Such, for example, is the case of Groundhog Day.

As a story progresses towards the end, though, the audience knows the characters inside out and expects a satisfying resolution, according to what has happened so far. Anything else feels artificial or random.


Examples of Problematic Twists at the End

The policeman is as amazed -and as fooled- as the audience.
Although many may argue with this opinion, the end of The Usual Suspects is an example of a very problematic twist. However impressive it may be, it comes from nowhere, without any setup that could justify it as meaningful. Moreover, it expresses a hubristic stance that the screenwriter is superior to the audience he has amazed, because he can exploit their suspension of disbelief. He creates and cancels plot as he likes, taking the audience for a ride just as his devilish villain Keyser Söze swindles the policeman. Not only is the twist unsatisfactory, but it also pushes the boundaries of storytelling morals, as the writer gains the impressions, but loses our trust.

How can you be saved, after you have danced with the devil? By introducing an "It was all a dream" twist.
In The Devil’s Advocate, the final twist shows that the whole film has been only a flash-forward and the protagonist has a second chance to make the right decisions. A problematic resolution that causes the audience's empathy for the protagonist to disappear. We, real people, seldom have second chances in life and, unless one is a psychic, even less common are flash-forwards. If the ending of The Devil's Advocate left you a bit dissatisfied, maybe this is the reason.


In Wild Things, there is a series of final twists that form a sequence of false endings. The result is that the story has no real conclusion -and who cares?- as the false endings undermine the power of the real one. The audience’s empathy for the characters and concern for the outcome is gone. (False endings are explicitly ridiculed in Robert Moore's 1976 comedy Murder by Death.)


The Sixth Sense’s Success


The Sixth Sense has a frequently discussed and utterly satisfying twist, the success of which lies on the following elements:

  • Its setup and payoff process is a masterpiece, executed without leaving the audience feeling cheated. If we watch the film for a second time, we are satisfied to see that the screenwriter pulls off such a storytelling stunt in an honest and respectful to the audience way.
  • It is meaningful: it finally explains Bruce Willis's ruined marriage - he has lost his wife because he is, actually, dead.
  • It is ironic: a little boy who can see the dead learns to accept his powers with the help of a dead man.
  • Although the twist is meaningful, the story doesn’t rely on it to have meaning. The story's main tension is resolved before the twist: dead or not, Willis helps the kid accept his supernatural powers.


A Twist Steals the Show


A successful twist can offer great delight to the movie-goers. There is, however, the question of whether a good story is helped by an overwhelming twist. It is very likely that The Sixth Sense’s masterpiece twist helped the film’s box office numbers; several people may have watched this $40m-budget film at least twice, contributing to the film's worldwide gross of almost $673m. It may be a little unfair, though, that most people hardly remember anything other than the final twist at the end of a very touching story.

29 June 2012

Analysis of a scene: Ossessione


OSSESSIONE: THE STRANGER MEETS GIOVANNA

This boy-meets-girl scene occurs near the film's beginning. It is the inciting incident of this dark romance by Luchino Visconti.


Protagonist: the stranger, who is looking for something to eat.
Antagonist: Giovanna, who wants him out of the kitchen.
Subtext: their instant sexual attraction and Giovanna's resistance to it.

Needless to say, the relationship between the scene's outer and inner conflicts is superb, because they are both based on primal human needs: food and love.
  • Outer conflict: He is hungry for food and wants to eat / She wants him out of the kitchen.
  • Inner conflict: She is hungry for love / She wants to resist his seduction.
Protagonist's general strategy: seeing the effect that he has on her, the stranger decides to charm Giovanna. He compliments her looks and cooking, and he also makes her drool when he takes his jacket off, exposing his strong shoulders.

Scene's major beats (see the Glossary page for explanations on the terms):

SETUP: Looking for something to eat, the Stranger walks into the kitchen and finds Giovanna polishing her fingernails. Giovanna is a young and elegant woman, whose crude and obese husband makes her cook for his patrons. On the other hand, the stranger is a handsome, young man, a little rough-cut, but very different to Giovanna's husband. They instantly get attracted to each other.

CATALYST: He asks for food. (Subtext: They are instantly attracted to each other.)

DEBATE: She tells him to get out of the kitchen. (Subtext: her resistance to the sexual attraction.)

BREAK TO SCENE'S ACT II: He boldly approaches the cooker and tastes the food.

NEW WORLD: He compliments her looks and her cooking. This is all new for Giovanna, a woman whose sexual virtues and needs seem to have been overlooked for too long. It seems that he has almost achieved his goal, when Giovanna orders him, again, to wait in the other room.

APPROACH TO INMOST CAVE: The stranger ignores her once again. Moreover, he takes his coat off, flashing his strong arms and shoulders at the woman. She, finally, gives in and serves him the food in the kitchen.

MIDPOINT (false victory): The stranger sits down with a plate of food before him. He has what he has come in there for [+].

BAD GUYS CLOSE IN: Bragana's voice echoes in the tavern. The stranger can't eat.

ALL IS LOST (false defeat): Bragana comes in and kicks the stranger out. The stranger hits the road, hungry again [-]. (Subtext: Even worse, the untold romance is about to end prematurely.)

BREAK TO SCENE'S ACT III: Giovanna pulls a trick and gets her husband to call the stranger back into the tavern [+].

The scene's end is a remarkable "hook" that keeps us interested to see what will happen next. Will the stranger understand Giovanna's trick and invitation?

Check the film's full analysis here.